Small but important favor.

[Ignition]

The following is an essay, which is in dire need of a proof reader. I am hoping some one with a superior intellect and some free time would copy this in to a word document, edit it and re past it in there reply.
The only reason I am asking this favor here is because any one that could or would proof read this is busy or just doesn’t want to do it for me any more.

Thanks -Nec


The gas you put in the car is not what you should be worrying about, it’s what comes out that is concerning. One of the biggest causes of green house gases is the automobile. By simply traveling to work, the store or just dropping your kid off at soccer practice is filling our atmosphere with harmful green house gases. Sadly one the biggest cause of green house gases is in the burning of fossil fuels. People should look for alternatives to fossil fuel use.

The combustion engine is not the most affecting motor in the knowledge of man, but it is surely one of the most common. The only problems with running the combustion engine on fusel fuels are:
-green house gasses are being emitted from the tail pipe along with other harmful gases, such as carbon monoxide.
-we are depleting the world’s supply of fossil fuels.

Green house gases burn holes in the earth’s atmosphere, which are being blamed for global warming. Many people blame all of the recent world events on global warming.

We need to find a new source of propellant from which to run our automobiles, as fossil fuels are destroying the environment by burning holes in the ozone. It’s also becoming very costly to produce because it is becoming harder to find and extract, which in turn is also raising the cost for consumers. The world’s fossil fuels are becoming depleted as well; this will someday force the transition from fossil fuels that produce green house gases to some sort of cleaner and better propellant.

Many solutions have been attempted and tested, they are proving promising. They will be inexpensive to run, and will emit very little to no green house gases. Many of these new automobiles will run on electricity, compressed air, hydrogen, and combinations of them.
All of theses new styles or travel are fuel efficient will not only make traveling more affordable but also safer for the environment.

In another 50 year I can see fossils fuels and green house emissions falling to a very low percentage world wide. We can only hope that in the future we find a way to not only stop harming the environment with green house gases but a way to also repair the damage that we have already caused.

[Snarr]

I'm bored, want me to up the style a bit ?

[kegsworth]

Necross,
I would love to be of some help but im due for a meeting as of now and will not be back on till much later....had i seen this earlier i would have given suggestions...although i see no problems with it. Good job.

[Snarr]

Actually I see lots of errors.

[Moose]

Thats an Essay? Looks more like a 1 page summary.

[Ignition]

I'm bored, want me to up the style a bit ?
dont snaze it up too mcuh the teacher know I'm not very capabul...
but great thanks!

[Snarr]

Wrong wrong wrong wrong wrong!
You got it scientifically wrong, not just style.

[The Exile]

Yes, fossil fuels have nothing to do with the ozone layer. Their burning causes the greenhouse effect, where heat from the sun is trapped in the atmosphere, causing the planet to heat up. You are thinking of CFCS (chlorofluorocarbons), which were until recently used in aerosols. They "attack" the ozone layer, allowing more harmful UV rays from the sun to get through to the surface. That is a completely different environmental problem.

[Snarr]

I can't do the scientific work for you man. Greenhouse gasses (1 word, capitalised) don't "burn" a hole in the ozone layer, those are florochlurocarbonates emmited from old fridges, spray cans, etc. The hole (not holes, there's only 1 centered above the earths south pole due to it's axe of rotation) does not cause globarl warming both rather allowd UV light.

[Snarr]

OK I wrote mine 20 minutes ago and didn't press the button.

[Moose]

Less Fossil Fuels, More Wind Power!

[Ignition]

OK I wrote mine 20 minutes ago and didn't press the button.
What did you mean by didn't press the button.

All I am asking is for an edited version of the same essay. thanks again for humaring me this far.

[Godmic18]

Thanks -Nec


The gas you put in the car is not what you should be worrying about, it’s what comes out that is concerning. One of the biggest causes of green house gases is the automobile. By simply traveling to work, the store or just dropping your kid off at soccer practice is filling our atmosphere with harmful green house gases. Sadly one the biggest cause of greenhouse gases is in the burning of fossil fuels. People should look for alternatives to fossil fuel use.They are. You should list some of the things they've come up with including Hydrogen engines, solar, wind, even grass power.

The combustion engine is not the most effective motor in the knowledge of man, but it is surely one of the most common. The only problems with running the combustion engine on fossil fuels are:
-green house gasses are being emitted from the tail pipe along with other harmful gases, such as carbon monoxide.
-we are depleting the world’s supply of fossil fuels. I would stay away from listing things if I were you.

Greenhouse gases burning a hole in the earth’s atmosphere, which is being blamed for global warming. Many people blame all of the recent world events on global warming. Maybe mention that global warming doesn't exist and that the Earth is simply going through a heat phase very similar to what happened previous to the ice age.

We need to find a new source of propellant from which to run our automobiles (no comma) as fossil fuels are destroying the environment by burning holes in the ozone. It’s also becoming very costly to produce because it is becoming harder to find and extract, which(delete in turn, it's not needed) is also raising the cost for consumers. The world’s fossil fuels are becoming depleted as well. (new sentence) This will someday force the transition from fossil fuels that produce greenhouse gases to some sort of cleaner and better propellant.

Many solutions have been attempted and tested and they are proving promising. They will be inexpensive to run (no comma) and will emit very little to no greenhouse gases. Many of these new automobiles will run on electricity, compressed air, hydrogen, and combinations of them.
All of these new styles for travel that are fuel efficient will not only make traveling more affordable but also safer for the environment.

In another fifty years I can see fossils fuels and green house emissions falling to a very low percentage world wide. How so? Sure there are new technologies out there, but none of them are efficient enough to keep up with fossil fuels or readily accessible to the public. You also have to think about other countries. Just because we start using hydrogen cars doesn't mean 2nd and 3rd world countries will. We can only hope that in the future we find a way to not only stop harming the environment with greenhouse gases as well as a way to (don't use also here) repair the damage that we have already caused.

kk

[Snarr]

Dude you need to fix the scientific errors! In simple terms, Greenhouse effect and hole in ozone layer are two seperate things. Cars = Greenhouse gasses.

[Godmic18]

Dude you need to fix the scientific errors! In simple terms, Greenhouse effect and hole in ozone layer are two seperate things. Cars = Greenhouse gasses.

Among other things. There's actually a long list of things contributing to greenhouse gasses.

[Ignition]

All I can say is:
-Thanks!
and:
-Dont forget my reputation for pour spelling...

[Swartzstrom]

The gas you put in the car is not what you should be worrying about, it’s what comes out should be your greatest concern. One of the biggest causes of green house gases is the automobile. By simply traveling to work, the store or just dropping your kid off at soccer practice is filling our atmosphere with toxic gaseous substances harmful to our Ozone Layer. Sadly one the biggest causes of Greenhouse gases is in the burning of fossil fuels. It would be wise if people searched for alternatives to fossil fuel use, such as Hydrogen, Solar, and Wind-powered engines.

The combustion engine is not the most effective motor in the knowledge of man, but it is surely one of the most common. Unfortunately problems concerning the Combustion Engine become apparent. When the engine runs, Greenhouse gasses are emitted from the tail pipe along with other harmful gases, such as Carbon Monoxide. At the same time, we are depleting the world’s supply of fossil fuels.

Green house gases burn holes in the Earth’s atmosphere, which is blamed for Global Warming. Many people blame all of the recent environmental world events on global warming.

We need to find a new source of propellant from which to run our automobiles, as fossil fuels are destroying the environment by burning holes in the Ozone Layer and are also becoming very costly to produce because it is becoming harder to find and extract, which in turn is also raising the cost for consumers. The world’s fossil fuels are being depleted as well; this will someday force the transition from fossil fuels that produce Greenhouse gases to some sort of cleaner and better propellant.

Many solutions have been attempted and tested and they are proving promising. They will be inexpensive to run, and will emit very little to no Greenhouse gases. Many of these new automobiles will run on electricity, compressed air, hydrogen, and combinations of those and others. All of these new styles of travel are fuel efficient and will not only make traveling more affordable, but also safer for the environment.

In another 50 years I can see fossils fuels and Greenhouse emissions falling to a very low percentage worldwide. We can only hope that in the future we find a way to not only stop harming the environment with Greenhouse gases but a way to also repair the damage that we have already caused.

(What d'you think? Is that good?)