Buster
08-01-2006, 02:10 PM
Well Im trying to get in to the whole fan fic. thing so I was thinking about TAO. And he is what I got. This is just the intro, and well I was woundering what you guys thought of it. If you guys like it I may write some more... and if you dont... I may still write some more...
So Here you go:
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Tactics Arena - Oblivion
A new War.
By Buster.
Prologue:
The darkness. I haven’t seen the light, in what seems like a eon. The war may have only started three months ago, but the murder, the chaos, have made this war 100 fold what it should have been. Everyone has been hurt, and no one is happy. Even the Dark Lord Sin, a Cleric, that used his powers to start this war, can not see joy in this.
I am one of the last survivors of my unit. I am one of the finest riders from the beast riders column. My unit and I were walking along a water bank when we were jumped by a Black Knight riding a dragon. The dragon was no normal dragon though. No dragon could be that strong. It was a golden dragon, most likely because of the Dark Lord Sin, and that beast had the power to wipe out my whole unit in one attack. If it had not been for the Barrier Wards, engineered at the beginning of the war, I would have been killed and so would what is left of my unit.
My unit is made up of seven other beast riders, twelve assassins, five pyromancers, six archers, two that were trained to be scouts, and nine knights. I would love to say we are all in great shape, but we are not. Most of our beasts are injured, there are only two that can still run at top speeds. Our assassins have become angry at the knights for slowing us down, and are now blaming them for us being attacked. The pyromancers are mad at the archers and scouts for moving out too far and not defending the magic units, such as our golems, dark witches, and pyromancers. The scouts are off by themselves. And finally our knights' weapons are breaking. We had a unit of over 200 men and women, but now we are down to 39. The men have named me there leader. Sadly, I do not know how to lead them. I know that the right thing for Tremanioc is to fight. But the right thing for my men would be to flee from battle.
Tremanioc, our homeland, is lead by the great lord Numen. Our king, lord Numen, has asked upon us to go to Sendia, where the enemy is said to be attacking soon. But will this small unit of 39 warriors really help in the battle? Can the light of hope prostrate the lucent of darkness?
Series 1: The Age of War
Chapter 1: The Journey to Sendia.
Me and my man have been traveling now for 112 days. We where one of the first units to be sent out in to battle, but besides the confrontation at the water bank, we have only been in one battle. We had just moved out of the village of the Scouts, Montañas Rocosas, when we were ambushed. The unit was lead by the same Black Knight that had attacked us on the water bank. The battle last a few days, we fought with all we had, and only lost a few men in the battle, a Furgon, that had joined us when we were walk though the heavily wooded land of Huron, two assassins, both who used explosives to destroy three Stone Golems, 2 Mud Golems and four other beast we had never seen before, and one knight, this knight was killed by a dragon at the start of this battle.
On day 106 was the day we where attack at the water bank. That day was the worst day of this whole war. We where in Terre De l'Eau and this of one of the first good days we had in some time. The sun was high and the sky were pure, that is until we crossed over a hill to be assaulted by that golden dragon. This dragon was five times the normal size of those tyrants. Its wings reached out over 300 feet, and it was lacking out fire with every breath. My unit fought with all there might, even though they knew they would never get past this battle. It looked as if we had defeated the beast, our unit had forced the dragon back to a corner, but then that beast released a meteor of a fire blast. The flare itself burnt many men to death, but for the men that had the blast hit them were killed without thought. What is left of my man had been behind a barrier ward, and one brave knight activated it. Sadly that knight was kill a moment later by the Black Knights blade. If it had not been for a scout that had one arrow, that had not been burnt from the dragon, and was outside of the barrier shot the dragon right in the eye. The dragon flow off in a fiery rage. We tried to nurse that scout, but he died about an hour later.
Now we are on an open road that leads Sendia.
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So Here you go:
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Tactics Arena - Oblivion
A new War.
By Buster.
Prologue:
The darkness. I haven’t seen the light, in what seems like a eon. The war may have only started three months ago, but the murder, the chaos, have made this war 100 fold what it should have been. Everyone has been hurt, and no one is happy. Even the Dark Lord Sin, a Cleric, that used his powers to start this war, can not see joy in this.
I am one of the last survivors of my unit. I am one of the finest riders from the beast riders column. My unit and I were walking along a water bank when we were jumped by a Black Knight riding a dragon. The dragon was no normal dragon though. No dragon could be that strong. It was a golden dragon, most likely because of the Dark Lord Sin, and that beast had the power to wipe out my whole unit in one attack. If it had not been for the Barrier Wards, engineered at the beginning of the war, I would have been killed and so would what is left of my unit.
My unit is made up of seven other beast riders, twelve assassins, five pyromancers, six archers, two that were trained to be scouts, and nine knights. I would love to say we are all in great shape, but we are not. Most of our beasts are injured, there are only two that can still run at top speeds. Our assassins have become angry at the knights for slowing us down, and are now blaming them for us being attacked. The pyromancers are mad at the archers and scouts for moving out too far and not defending the magic units, such as our golems, dark witches, and pyromancers. The scouts are off by themselves. And finally our knights' weapons are breaking. We had a unit of over 200 men and women, but now we are down to 39. The men have named me there leader. Sadly, I do not know how to lead them. I know that the right thing for Tremanioc is to fight. But the right thing for my men would be to flee from battle.
Tremanioc, our homeland, is lead by the great lord Numen. Our king, lord Numen, has asked upon us to go to Sendia, where the enemy is said to be attacking soon. But will this small unit of 39 warriors really help in the battle? Can the light of hope prostrate the lucent of darkness?
Series 1: The Age of War
Chapter 1: The Journey to Sendia.
Me and my man have been traveling now for 112 days. We where one of the first units to be sent out in to battle, but besides the confrontation at the water bank, we have only been in one battle. We had just moved out of the village of the Scouts, Montañas Rocosas, when we were ambushed. The unit was lead by the same Black Knight that had attacked us on the water bank. The battle last a few days, we fought with all we had, and only lost a few men in the battle, a Furgon, that had joined us when we were walk though the heavily wooded land of Huron, two assassins, both who used explosives to destroy three Stone Golems, 2 Mud Golems and four other beast we had never seen before, and one knight, this knight was killed by a dragon at the start of this battle.
On day 106 was the day we where attack at the water bank. That day was the worst day of this whole war. We where in Terre De l'Eau and this of one of the first good days we had in some time. The sun was high and the sky were pure, that is until we crossed over a hill to be assaulted by that golden dragon. This dragon was five times the normal size of those tyrants. Its wings reached out over 300 feet, and it was lacking out fire with every breath. My unit fought with all there might, even though they knew they would never get past this battle. It looked as if we had defeated the beast, our unit had forced the dragon back to a corner, but then that beast released a meteor of a fire blast. The flare itself burnt many men to death, but for the men that had the blast hit them were killed without thought. What is left of my man had been behind a barrier ward, and one brave knight activated it. Sadly that knight was kill a moment later by the Black Knights blade. If it had not been for a scout that had one arrow, that had not been burnt from the dragon, and was outside of the barrier shot the dragon right in the eye. The dragon flow off in a fiery rage. We tried to nurse that scout, but he died about an hour later.
Now we are on an open road that leads Sendia.
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