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ben66
01-20-2008, 09:41 PM
Show off your marvels of work my friend! I see too many smart and creative people in TAO and not enough chances to show it off! Post here and share your creativity :).

Here's an example:



There were 4 people named something, nothing, everwhere, everything, everybody and nobody. Something told everybody to find everything. But everything was hidden so they went to nobody. Nobody found nothing and nothing found everything. Nobody looked for everywhere and found nothing. Nothing then helped and came across something. Something said, "go ask somebody where everything is." There were all clueless and in the end Nothing was actually something pretending to be nobody who was actually everybody who was everywhere and everything. They all were confused but no more confused then you could possibly be at the end of this.


Post your creativity TAO friends!

Greed
01-20-2008, 10:02 PM
Isn't that six people?

XeqtR
01-20-2008, 10:14 PM
That sucked.

mushroom_girl
01-20-2008, 10:43 PM
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
This thread sucks,
and so do you. <3

:)

Zander
01-20-2008, 10:46 PM
God damn thing didn't paste all of what I typed into that rep. Just know that it was cruel, funny, and demeaning.

Punishment
01-20-2008, 10:47 PM
Roses are red,
Violes are blud.
Mushroom is Gangsta
And is puns Boo.

Cavour
01-20-2008, 10:47 PM
What's the opposite of an encore?

Do that.

~Priest~
01-20-2008, 10:49 PM
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
This thread sucks,
and so do you. <3

:)

I like your two sentence structure here and 4 line stanza. I especially like the change of meter in the last line; it really emphasizes, "and so do you," after you say how this thread sucks.

ben66
01-21-2008, 09:55 AM
I agree. Sorry.

rabbi
01-21-2008, 12:49 PM
I agree. Sorry.

Way ta fight bak, sport.